Sunday, February 21, 2010

Revisiting old works: DeVee: The lost sparrow

Note: This was a very long time ago. Slightly sucks ass.

DeVee looks out over the Deck. She paced back and forth, her hands behind her back. A man stepped into her path and said," one of the traitors came back...” she stopped, turned and went below deck.

The man was being held down by three men, with there guns to his head. The pod was fine, and DeVee smiled at this. "Stand you bastard...” she growled, glaring at the man.
"mam.. We left... I’m sorry... Ill pay in any way possible... "
"Why did you come back?"
"We...we were attacked by... By... I don’t know what it was...”
"Well... You will pay. "
"Thank you-"
"With your life." she said the final words then shouted into the intercom "ALL HANDS ON DECK!" she points at the quivering man and says "grow some balls. Meet me on the deck."

She stood next to a man, surrounded by her crew in a circle around the two. "Face me." she said to him and he turned to face those cold, heartless eyes. as she came into view he felt something hard on his temple, and a click of a gun being readied.
"Last words?"
"I-"
"You are a traitor and get NO last words...”
She blew a hole his head; he fell dead to the deck.
"LET THIS BE A LESSON! THOSE WHO BETRAY ME WILL BE HUNTED DOWN AND KILLED!"

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